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FaceTheDoll (
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) - Last updated 09-15-2023, 09:39 AM Rating given for TheOne's post in Kelsai Adamson vs. “The One” Kirsten Scott Positive (+1): I like motivated Kristen a lot. You've got a lot of good lines here, but the ending about Death and Taxes and Kristen was my favorite. |
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FaceTheDoll (
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) - Last updated 09-15-2023, 09:29 AM Rating given for TheOne's post in Kelsai Adamson vs. “The One” Kirsten Scott Positive (+1): Really liked the scene in the pizzeria. I'd say that you should use less commas as some of your sentences went a little long and could have been just as useful as entirely new sentences, but it honestly works really well sometimes. Great job! |
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